White Flag
Day one:We went out
Into that boiling hell-hole Of wind burned sunswept mirages, Laughing – Boasting – Confident – |
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Like all young men
When they do What they haven’t done before. We’d win. We knew. For young men cannot die (Or such young men believe) Night one: Snake bite In a hellish night Suffered Randalls. Snake died – big snake – black – small spot on the back of its shattered head – Still young Still sure Still laughed, But Randalls limped a little When he talked And we shivered As we grinned. Day two: We limped As we laughed On our blistered feet In the grinding scratching seething sun Though we killed the bite Randalls’ leg infected. Dusty scorpions Bathing dragons Crunching underfoot Soft hair on our faces Stiffening in the blazing wind Strong in the challenge We laughed. Night two: Slept well In a hollow in the crazy sand Laughing in our dreams As on occasion we won Randalls slept Though the sand Ground deep In the widening festering wound Sometimes whimpered While the shifting Cold sand Covered us. Day three: We woke With the sand and the sun in our eyes – Red, grinding eyes Grinned at each other Croaked at each other Buried Randalls – aged quickly For young men cannot die (or so young men believe) Set out again In the granite forest At the base of the black plateau Hot sun raked us Like the cats of the hungry plateau We drank our water Great Gluttonous Gulps Suddenly it was gone Grinning slightly Looked up At the black heathen outline Watching as the pale, pitiless sun picked at out glittering eyes. Night three: Black clouds Choked in a Sea of boulders Granite needles Pierced through the night Shallow dried-up pitfalls And how we prayed for the light Windstrung fingers In the frozen darkness Strumming us in our sleep Cold as the Kiss of Death… Epilogue: Sandstone cliffs Stand out Against a pale burning sky Painful flashes – slashes – Of a long-dead storm Flag barely Flutters White flag Nearly covered in sand Like attempted truce To the cruel sun the sand black cliffs red wind And pale, burning sky. |
I think a big part of the inspiration for this poem came from listening to the sad stories my dad told of his experiences in Korea, during the Korean War. After ten months in the front lines and having seen so many of his friends die, he was determined that none of us would ever go through the same experience. For him, though he never complained, the horror was something he lived with his entire life. Although I wrote this poem many years ago, it is still dedicated to all the young men who have faced such horrors and given their lives on foreign soil for freedom and for those who continue to do so today. Incidentally, Dad didn’t really like this poem.
© David H. (Dave) Cottrell